I have been thinking of blogging for quite sometime now but penning down thoughts to actual words is quite a task. But here I go finally!!
To start with, what is so beautiful about today? Well, the topic speaks of Hope. And Hope is Life. The moment we lose Hope, we are dead. Everyone is living with the hope that some day we would find the happiness and answers that we are looking for. Someday we would find Life worth living. This is what my first post is about.
This world is harsh and cruel
And I am beginning to run out of fuel.
I fought and lost everything I had
I screwed up things real bad.
The pain is too much to speak
My life remains a collection of broken dreams.
The scar runs far too deep
Still I love, Still I live.
Life is worth another try.
Never gonna say die.
Yesterday is over. Past.
Bad times not gonna last.
Today again I am on my way...
And its gonna be a beautiful day.
16 comments:
nice one monu.. kal raat mei hi likhe?
similar thoughts tumhare writings mei pehle bhi xpress kiye ho abt running out of fuel.. evn ur status speaked somethin like it few days bk...
hope to put in more gusts of efforts to brk d jinx n really make it beautiful for all dayz to cm :)
keep bloggin.. grt initiative
thanks. nice to get first comment. yup kal raat likh rahe the aaj subah complete kiye.
huha once again... short, curt and very very positive...
btw very interesting name chosen by . ;)
Loved the blog name
great start.. gud to see u blogging... a vry positive thot.. impressed.. will look forward for more
:)
ur 1st, mera 2nd...nd again impressive
like ur attitude man.. i really do..
it will be a beautiful day..some day it will be...keep going
(aur fuel khatam ho to bhondu bhi rakhta hai :D )
@ronsin. thanks. actually it was very hard to decide upon a name :)
@myself. actually had decided upon this name months back and created a blog but was hesistant on writing anything. yesterday decided to go with it and write a poem on blog title itself :)
i am myself looking forward to blogging more and suggest you start too!!
hehe @gaurav. nice take on fuel. gr8 sense of humour. really made me laugh.
thanks dude. i have been waiting for the comments but when it comes in form of such lavish praise it brings me at a loss of words. i am really honoured. and about you all i have to say that i may know the path but you are already treading on it.
First and foremost, I like the rather carefully decorated BLOG. Inspiring at times. More so at other times! And yes, nice first post. Darkness. And then light. I'm luvin' it...... marcks123@yahoo.co.in
Gud 1 monu!!So finally the fire within u is enlightening all of us.I suppose u rather not run out of fuel this time.Keep blogging to spread these nice & positive thoughts. :)
Hmm. must say that the poetry is of top notch quality. In these 3 poems you have already displayed three different styles of poetry. Well, better express it all than keeping it in.. that will be a sheer waste of talent... I'm talking of the poetic skills here :P
Hmm.. and i like the positive way you meander to finish at..
for me thats the take away
at the end of a dreary day
its no good being down and crappy
when you can be up and happy
well there we go...
nice thinking put even more nicely...
dint get to read this one in ur diary..
@chinmaya. thanks that u did mention it. i put in a lot of effort :P and btw i love contradiction.. life is so full of it... so naturally darkness and light.. :)
@nn.. well i will surely try.. but its so hard to be that way all the way :)
@bohemian... wow!!! i really loved it. best comment so far to me :) thank you. and ya i like to finish on a positive note because writing a poem is kind of sorting out thoughts for me.. so i kind of end up with a solution or a positive mindframe.
@extremum. thanks. ya this is the new one. written when u were gone :P
nice one......
nice and positive approach.........really good
very nice
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